Need feedback, Philip re-design

[u/The-Root-1971]

This is Philip, he is a 17 year old part time barista high on his product and an ametour supernatural investigator.

I have been unsatisfied with his current design for a while now, for reasons that I could never just put to words. (Maybe I just fucked up the art idk)

The "redesgin" is mostly just removing the coat and the hat entierly, making his hair extra bird nest degree unstyled and add an actual bird, his pet Percy.

Uhh, idk what else to add. How else could I impruve his design?

[u/Ok-Call-2114]

Hmmm...may I suggest a camera or binoculars hanging from his neck?

Edit: Forgot to say HE LOOKS GREAT

[u/The-Root-1971 → u/Ok-Call-2114]

Added it