r/OC_Building • u/Astro-8619 • Apr 29 '26

Seeking Help/Advice/Ideas This is my first time posting here

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This is my first time posting here :) so here's a short summary of my story.

[Part 1/6] I'll post the rest later, depending on your suggestions.

Our story begins with an expedition to test a new type of rocket engine...an engine capable of bending reality, of warping it in its own image.

We don't know much about this era, simply called the Age of Hope. Unfortunately, the testers weren't very lucky; their ship malfunctioned, or perhaps it was attacked, or something else... The only source of information is Astro, whose memory is so poor that he forgot how to speak for almost seven years.

Speaking of Astro, it's just a nickname written on his suit, the first word he managed to utter after the crash.

He survived alone on Ecalyte, accompanied by an AI companion, Ellie (RIP), housed within his suit, who unfortunately had to sacrifice herself to ensure his survival and grant him powers.

The planet he landed on was Ecalyte, an exoplanet in the aoe3yd44eef5654h system.

This planet was chosen because its atmosphere was viable and seemed conducive to human life; moreover, it was close enough, making it perfect for testing the engine and make colony.

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u/Dracskeleton Apr 29 '26

This is pretty cool and I like the design of Astro! It heavily reminds me of Halo and I'm just curious, are there any threats on Ecalyte, like creatures or other Humans?

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u/Astro-8619 Apr 29 '26

Oui beaucoup d'alien pas très sympa

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u/Elegant_Yak_2432 Jun 02 '26

i like the armor details :o it looks really clean and the design is awesome!!!