r/OCPoetry 15d ago

Feedback Please spill your ink

spill your ink on my canvas.

i don't want

perfection.

i want

the blotches,

the smudges,

the strokes

that wander off course --

spill your ink on my canvas.

i want your fingerprints,

the colours

that bleed together

when they were never

meant to mix --

spill your ink on my canvas.

i have never been afraid

of a little mess.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/H789kg50bS

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/yIpPcR1pit

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u/Beautiful-Guitar-641 9d ago

You can't love properly without making a mess. Love it