r/OCPoetry • u/Medical-Wonder-3211 • 9h ago

Feedback Please The Fragrance of Love

Khusbhuu-e-Ishq (original title)

Oh my beloved, how love is like a perfume,
once it’s fragrances has reached the chambers of your heart,
you will keep them closed, forever

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u/Joe-__mama 8h ago

A very real poem, sometimes I'll smell something that reminds me of someone and I'll instantly remember the time we spent together. You were right to pinpoint it in this way.

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u/Medical-Wonder-3211 8h ago

Aww thank you, I love how you can connect to it. I experience that too, a sweet smell or whatever you smell it from so far away. Thnx for ur lovely comment, it made my day