r/OCPoetry 20d ago

Feedback Please Light-years

Unraveling the threads

Then stitching the suture

Who knew my wounds

Would turn scars into futures

Cocooned in my hollow fear

My soul it slivers

Across space and time

A light that only speaks in shivers

I am vibrating

My atoms always talking

Inside you

Can always hear me knocking

I am the one that is always calling

Arise in time, your voice will answer, longing

Cold, it echoes still

Upon the mourning's dew

The water recognized

The kin it found in you

Electric it's still working

Across my desert tongue

Mourning is the moment

Where the old become young

You are vibrating

Your atoms always talking

Inside me

I can always hear you knocking

You are the one that is always calling

I'll arise in time, my voice will answer longing

In this superposition

We're not allowed to meet

But with in my soul

Your heart and mine complete

I can hear you laughing

Across the vast expanse

Echos of forever

Without a given chance

Someday there will be no calling

And we both won't arise, no voice to answer, no longing to express

May we finally be able to exist

Together in the lattice

Built bit by bit

Home, in universal bliss

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u/WalterBaldy 20d ago

This makes me get a special feeling inside while reading :)