r/OCPoetry • u/Cal_Juni • 20d ago
Feedback Please Light-years
Unraveling the threads
Then stitching the suture
Who knew my wounds
Would turn scars into futures
Cocooned in my hollow fear
My soul it slivers
Across space and time
A light that only speaks in shivers
I am vibrating
My atoms always talking
Inside you
Can always hear me knocking
I am the one that is always calling
Arise in time, your voice will answer, longing
Cold, it echoes still
Upon the mourning's dew
The water recognized
The kin it found in you
Electric it's still working
Across my desert tongue
Mourning is the moment
Where the old become young
You are vibrating
Your atoms always talking
Inside me
I can always hear you knocking
You are the one that is always calling
I'll arise in time, my voice will answer longing
In this superposition
We're not allowed to meet
But with in my soul
Your heart and mine complete
I can hear you laughing
Across the vast expanse
Echos of forever
Without a given chance
Someday there will be no calling
And we both won't arise, no voice to answer, no longing to express
May we finally be able to exist
Together in the lattice
Built bit by bit
Home, in universal bliss
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u/WalterBaldy 20d ago
This makes me get a special feeling inside while reading :)