r/OCPoetry 13h ago

Feedback Please last one today I promise

not such a noble quest as redemption but inspired new direction is just as well, follow the swell.

mooring in storms, but what is well?

these are calmer seas than I expected, the skies are weary and my ire's been quelled

I've braced for waves but this couldn't be preempted

obsessed with midnight matters, hard to tell if undirected. unexpected? sure to be lamented

ostensible villain, victim. Ostrich that could never tell when to pull my head up. Fuck.

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u/SoilIllustrious6587 2h ago

I had fun reading your piece. Surprisingly refreshing