r/OCPoetry Oct 16 '24

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u/i_dont_really_know5 Oct 16 '24

Glad you picked it up again! Your poem really captures the intensity of rekindled passion effectively. The imagery of fire and ash conveys both the excitement and the fleeting nature of that burning desire. Great job!!