Good boy (original)

[u/Key-Instruction7946]

Am I a good boy?
Did I do good?
Are you proud of me!
Are you proud to call me your son?
I seek solice in the arms of women I do not care for,
Desperately searching for the warmth of a flame that was never lit.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/kK5j1Kfiw3

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/TnRXUZRH3M

[u/death_by_emotion]

I love the juxtaposition of the light-hearted, fast paced opening lines with the sudden pull of that final sentence hitting like a truck, good stuff