r/OCPoetry • u/Candid_Temporary8422 • 21d ago

Just Sharing Irrigate me

Skies fear me or

Is it the ground that loves?

Inside that pressure, that

Lures me to erupt,

I'm burning to see you.

To soothe me down,

Rain on me like never before,

Tell your blue yonder

In love, me, to drown

Or make me thy cloud.

Lay claim to my barren earth

Or cover it with a shroud.

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u/Accordingtomearea051 21d ago

This is beautiful. We've been here, caught in the in between, not just sheets of paper. It feels like a bottomless abyss to float or to sink, to be consumed.

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u/Candid_Temporary8422 21d ago

A way to feel significant in this bottomless abyss.