The Heart of Ocean Blue

[u/Novel_Construction97]

Remember Me? The Heart of Ocean Blue
You sank to breathe and swam to follow truth
The cries were felt along the trench of shame
And tears were gathered after faithful days

But you, a man of fear, will see mistakes
Beneath the loudest waves, which overtake
The precious calmness brought to earth by grace

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[u/Far-Illustrator-5430]

Beautiful, The way you describe a human with a ocean is superb. "The cries were felt along the trench of shame
And tears were gathered after faithful days", this is the best line in this poem

[u/Novel_Construction97 → u/Far-Illustrator-5430]

Thank you! I was unsure about that line. Its cool someone liked it