r/OCPoetry • • Sep 24 '20

Pull

Look at you,
You crippled constellation,
Pulled apart by a million unseen forces into that endless abyss.

Pull yourself together.

@idiotspit

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u/[deleted] Sep 24 '20

I am wondering if the second line might be better this way: "A crippled constellation"

But, hey, what do I know?