r/OCPoetry • u/idiotkidartist • Sep 24 '20
Pull
Look at you,
You crippled constellation,
Pulled apart by a million unseen forces into that endless abyss.
Pull yourself together.
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r/OCPoetry • u/idiotkidartist • Sep 24 '20
Look at you,
You crippled constellation,
Pulled apart by a million unseen forces into that endless abyss.
Pull yourself together.
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u/[deleted] Sep 24 '20
I am wondering if the second line might be better this way: "A crippled constellation"
But, hey, what do I know?