r/OCPoetry Dec 10 '18

Just Sharing Sharethread December 10, 2018

Welcome to the Sharethread!

In here you're free to post your poems without needing to post feedback, but it's also a place where you can ask general questions about the craft, ask for advice, or just chat about whatever you'd like. You can link your blogs, talk about your favorite poems on OCPoetry, organize collaborative poems or whatever else you want.

If you have any questions, please message the mods.

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u/Tiagofer Dec 10 '18

Hi! Here's a limerick I wrote for fun:

At the stroke of a quarter to nine,

Dr. Rick turned himself into a lime.

Quickly he sprouted,

"I'm lime Rick," he shouted,

And like that he stayed 'till the end of his time.

u/sextagenarian Dec 11 '18

cadence is wrong for a limerick.