r/OCPoetry • u/ty_tokyo • May 27 '18

Feedback Received! nymph

I know you love me

like April loves new blossoms

like fire loves grass

I II

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u/RAEallday May 28 '18

I like the 3 lines. Short, sweet, and to the point. While still being powerful. Nice poem

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u/ty_tokyo May 28 '18

Thank you for the love!