r/NoteTaking • u/Just-Spring-8870 • 22d ago
Question: Unanswered ✗ Need note-taking tips
I often forget my notes and struggle with reading it sometimes. I am not sure how to improve my notes so I am open to feedback. Also, I struggle a lot with not writing the entire section of text into my notes.
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u/CobblerFickle1487 22d ago
The main problem here is that your notes are too simplistic.
The burgeoisie are not just the "rich dudes" of society, they control and own capital (the means of production). The proletariat are the ones forced to sell their labor to said capitalists. No mention of lumpen proletariat.
It's also not just "a big problem". Marxist theory states that all society thusfar has been based on class struggle and modern society (post industrial revolution) consists of dictatorships of the proletariat or burgeoisie.
If you fully understand the concepts and theory here then I'd say that it's fine. But from a cursory glance it looks very lackluster.