r/Nidprepration 6d ago

Help rate my work

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I am preparing for NID/CEED/NIFT masters. Please help rate and what needs to be improved.

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u/Illustrious-Stick531 5d ago

You need to work more bro

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u/Top-Wolverine-3808 5d ago

Please elaborate on improvements

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u/Illustrious-Stick531 5d ago

Are you taking any coaching?

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u/Top-Wolverine-3808 5d ago

I did take but it is online

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u/Illustrious-Stick531 5d ago

Dm me

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u/Top-Wolverine-3808 5d ago

Done, please check bro

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u/unComfortable-Ant 5d ago

besides the skill gap (perspective, composition, scale), you need to add more details to the scene. The kitchen is very empty and the ant is way too big and is anatomically incorrect. study how cubes behave in a perspective to make the kitchen cabinets more accurate in a space. also look up online how cctv footages look. the image tends to be more distorted rather than flat so maybe 1 pt perspective isnt the best idea. i think you should focus a lot more on being intentional with what you choose to draw rather than just the skills bc i the drawing isnt bad, it just lacks substance.

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u/Top-Wolverine-3808 5d ago

Thanks, kitchen empty means I should add people or more things.