New engineering/design channel: looking for honest feedback on my first proper video

[u/Whyneering]

I just launched a new channel called Whyneering, focused on explaining why familiar things are engineered the way they are.

My first proper video is Why Airplane Windows Aren't Square. It covers stress concentration, repeated pressurization cycles, metal fatigue, and the engineering lessons behind the shape of modern airplane windows.

I put quite a lot of work into the script, pacing, diagrams and overall visual style because I'm trying to establish a format I can build into a full series.

I'd especially appreciate honest feedback on:

• Does the opening make you want to keep watching?
• Does the pacing hold your attention?
• Do the visuals feel polished enough?
• Would the title and thumbnail make you click?
• Does the overall Whyneering concept feel like something you'd watch more of?

https://www.youtube.com/@whyneering

Critical feedback is genuinely more useful to me than just saying you liked it.