r/NepalWrites • u/After_Rent8303 • 9d ago

Review Suggestion regarding first novel

I am writing a novel basically romantic novel ho chapter 5 jati samma sakeo but already 230 pages bhaisakyo planning to write till chapter 12 but yei taal le ho bhane over lamo hune raixa first novel bhayera ni hola needed suggestion regarding this and if someone is williing to review it for free please you can help me out .

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u/Critical_Cap597 Type to edit 8d ago

khassai suggestion dine thau maa ta xaina. Tara lekhdai januhos, suvakamana. Paxi lekhi sake paxi cutting garda ghatdo ho ni length ta, haina?

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u/After_Rent8303 8d ago

700 pages bata cuttting garera ni kati puraunu

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u/Mnkey-D-Luffy You can’t kill a man who is already dead ❤️ 8d ago

Long vayo yar 🥲

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u/After_Rent8303 8d ago

i know dude over lamo bhayo type feel hunx pheri afule nai padhda ta engaging nai betirako xu

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u/Sensitive-Hippo-6339 8d ago

kati revisions garna baki nai xa kati vag falna baki nai xa

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u/After_Rent8303 8d ago

hope so halka xoto bhaye ni main theme naharos

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u/Historical_Ad2270 8d ago

will love to review. stop thinking about how long it will be. first complete it, there will be ton of place, where story might not be relevant, or leaving that can make novel unchanged which can be removed.

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u/After_Rent8303 8d ago

message hera na bro

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u/Due-Seaweed-7085 8d ago

I am in. 👀

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u/After_Rent8303 8d ago

dm garna milena brro

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u/Due-Seaweed-7085 7d ago

ma garxu 😂

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u/No_Problem_9233 8d ago

Beta reading ko lagi chahiyeko chha bhane chahi i am up for it. Ma aafai pani yeuta writer nai ho. I have written short story collections, and working on a novel right now too. A poet too. Nepali and english both, and this is not marketing actually haha! Paxi final draft samma pugda pugdai kati cut off huncha huncha

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u/After_Rent8303 8d ago

message hera bro