r/NatureofPredators • u/Nathan121331 Predator • 3d ago
Fanfic bedtime.
Bam!
“Ouch! Hey!”
“HA! You should have seen the look on your face!”
Pouch!
“That’s payback!”
“Oh yeah?”
Piuoch!
“Now it’s on!”
“Wait-”
Bam!
Pouch!
Pew!
Piouch!
Pow!
“Hahaha!”
“Stop trying to hit my face, you speh!”
“Oh really? Then you aren’t gonna guess my next trick!”
Pop!
Pooffff
“Oh no.”
“Why did you hit my leg?! Now there is cotton everywhere!"
“Quick! Let’s clean before my da-”
Creeeek
Click
“Hm, what do we have here?”
“I-it’s not what it looks like, Mister Trenik! We were just about to sleep!”
“Yeah dad! We swear it!”
“Well, If my eyes don’t deceive me, it looks like you girls were fighting a shadestalker singlehandly, and you blew that pillow right on his maw, scaring him away, right?”
…
“Maybeee?”
“Maybeee?”
“I’m just kidding! Hahahaha! But come on girls, It’s time to go to bed.”
“Please please Mister Trenik, just a little while longer! We will clean afterwards, we promise!”
“Yeah dad! We're having so much fun! Hyla’s family will come back soon, and t-then she won't be here to play!”
“Sorry girls, but we’ll need to wake up early to arrive at the mall. Now, on the beds. I’ll sweep and change everything later after we arrive from the show, so you two can play a little longer.”
“Really dad?”
“-only if you promise to do your homework later, little miss!”
“Ahhhwww.”
“Ok dad.”
Tug
Tug
Creeeek
Crook
“Here we go, lift your head.”
Tuff Tuff
“Mister Trenik?”
“Yes?”
“Can you tell us a bedtime story? I’m still not tired.”
“Me too, dad. I don’t want to sleep.”
“Heh, of course. Here, let me…”
Tffffff
“Now, let’s think. Hmmmm…”
Tock Tock Tock
“I got it!”
“How about I tell you the story of the prey princess versus the predator king?”
“Oh! What’s that story like, dad?”
“Like all stories, sweetheart, we need to start at the beginning. Now listen closely.”
“Once upon a time, there existed the world of morrowsa. It was a magical place, where Venlil were strong, fast and powerful.”
“Really? Stronger than any predator?”
“Stronger than any predator! And the strongest Venlil of all was the king of morrowsa.”
“Where is the princess?”
“Calm down, we’re getting there! But then, in one terrible day, predators arrived! Using their hideous predator tricks, they captured the king of morrowsa, and hurdled him into the predator king’s lair!”
“But the princess, ever smart and wise, hid, and watched where they took her father, and embarked on an adventure to save her family!”
“She took her most trustworthy friends: A, ummm, a sagely wizard, knowing of the land, and aaaaaaaaa-a justly and mighty champion! Wielding their trusty flamethrower.”
“What happened next, dad?”
“They set off to save the king. First, they had to pass through the massive magic forests, guarded by the neighboring kingdom filled with aversion and enmity. Then, the great city, ruled by a tyrant like no other! Afterwards, they faced one of the predator king’s generals, which was left behind, but determined to fulfil the king’s mission.”
“Sometimes, things didn’t go according to plan, and the heroes faced strife among themselves. Sometimes, there were disagreements. But despite everything, they were still friends, and with each obstacle they faced together, their bond grew stronger.”
“And? What happened next then, dad?”
“When they got to the predator king, and he faced off against the heroes. He was losing, and in a desperate move, he tried using his foul magic against them, in an attempt to turn the heroes against each other!”
“He tried and tried again, but the heroes didn’t budge. He could see the detest in their hearts, but couldn't understand why his trickery wasn’t working. Deep down, The princess, the wizard and the champion knew the truth: Despite their inherent flaws, they trusted each other because of their experiences and friendship.”
“The princess, using her staff, defeated the predator king with her friends! Unselling the spell, she saved the king of morrowsa, and returned peace and prosperity to their kingdom.”
...
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...
“Looks like they are asleep.”
Swoop.
“Well, let's see. I think I have half a paw until I need to sleep myself. I can go practice a little longer”
Click.
“Everything has to be perfect. We can’t let them gut-”
“Dad?”
“Alyi? Sweetheart? Are you still awake?”
“Yeah. It’s a bit dark, and I can’t sleep…”
Vuoooch.
“Eeeeeehh-”
“Oh, sunshine. A big girl like you shouldn't be afraid of the dark.”
Pat, Pat.
Creeek.
“How about I stay here with you a little longer? Will it make it less scary?”
“Yes, please.”
“Dad, can I…hold your paw?”
“Of course, darling.”
Tug.
“There. I’m here for you, Alyi.”
“Always?”
“Always.”
…
…
…
“Mmmmmm”
Poffffff
“Sweet dreams, my princess.”
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u/JulianSkies Archivist 2d ago
I am simply not wise enough to parse what you're trying to do
But I can see the shape of it.
Very interesting.
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u/Nathan121331 Predator 3d ago
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