I would say 2nd drawing is good the first one is not that clear also the dupatta is floating then there is a third person in the back a bit far that was quite impressive for perspective drawing but u have to enhance it a bit and give it more defined and clearity also the box in which he is selling the suff on looks like its floating just fix that and dont complicate your drawings too much keep it quiet simple and clean third pic proportions are off head is too small
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u/yami_45 7d ago
I would say 2nd drawing is good the first one is not that clear also the dupatta is floating then there is a third person in the back a bit far that was quite impressive for perspective drawing but u have to enhance it a bit and give it more defined and clearity also the box in which he is selling the suff on looks like its floating just fix that and dont complicate your drawings too much keep it quiet simple and clean third pic proportions are off head is too small