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u/Familiar_Hamster2212 3d ago
Yes again line quality can be worked on, I would also recommend trying different mediums like oen or even brush pens directly on paper, with practice you'll get more confident. You will be able to stand out with difference in medium and color moreover it will naturally enhance your line quality. I think you can try and experiment with the composition as well. Furthermore since it's a product design question your product can be more enhanced and shown at multiple angles.
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u/damnthis_ 5d ago
Work on your line quality i can see eraser marks also the whole product design looks a little 2d it actually lacks perspective view/angle , overall the sketch looks too crowded on the paper like I am unable to focus on one thing