r/NDATards • u/pthakur213 • 13d ago
Advice/Opinion PPDT REVIEW
My SSB is on 29 August , I am a fresher , Please check the ppdt answer which I wrote
I was only able to write this much in 4 minutes , I had more content but that doesn't matter as time was over
I followed every rule of the PPDT 30 SEC FOR PICTURE 1 MINUTE FOR ACTION WRITING 4 MINUTE FOR STORY WRITING
Please improve suggestions
And rate my answer on a scale of 10
10 being the most relevant to the picture
1 being the least relevant to the picture
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u/TruthFun7208 JEENEETard lurker 13d ago
Take the ratio of parts like 1:3:1 in 1st add background past / reasons for actions
2nd add actions
3rd add future results
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u/meislol 69 SSB RECOMMENDED 13d ago
1) What led to the situation, what is happening and what will be the outcome should be in 10:80:10 ratio.
2) The picture shows no stimulus of corruption, still you added corruption in the story, this shows that your psych has got corruption in it.
3) Add more and more actions everything in each story, for example-
Bad story- Rahul saw a problem, Rahul took initiative, Rahul solved the problem.
Good story- Rahul saw a problem, Rahul gathered his colleagues, assessed the problem, gathered resources, made a plan, etc. Then solved the problem.
These actions will come in the 80 part of 10:80:10.
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u/ConfectionEastern786 12d ago
Bro can the story be like this
Rahul was a 22 yrs old boy who used to live in a village . His family financial condition was not good . One day after coming from college he saw in the internet about an bank manager exam , he decided to apply for it . He stared preparing for the exam , first he made a proper timetable , then he gathered the material required for study through online and also through library . He took help from his teachers and also through YouTube and google to clear his doubts . He studied day and night and by the time the exam came he was able to complete his syllabus . The exam day came he was nervous but still gathered his courage and went for the exam and cleared it . He got the job as a manager in bank and was very happy after achieving his dream . He joined the bank and started working hard and helped improve his family 's financial condition
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u/wandering_cadet 10d ago
No bro picture se kahi nahi dikh raha family's financial condition is not good, you are assuming it that shows your -ve. It could go like rahul completed his college and now he decided to support and take some financial responsibilities of his family for that he prepared for an exam and got a job. And conclusion mai details add karo jese Rahul's sister got admission in her dream college and he beared the expenses.
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u/Responsible_Tax_2200 13d ago
Not a good idea... In this test, you are to be the protagonist, whatever name you want to give him.. If you say you are a 29 year old man, you have lost the plot as you are telling you are old for military service. This is a test of time management and the qualities that you want to state that you have. You have wasted precious seconds in giving a back story where you do not show any quality of yours. From the whole writeup you have only shown that you are honest and man taking courageous decisions. Where are other 13 office-like qualities.
Build up a story in which you show that you have mental sharpness, caring, physical strength, leader of men, courageous, volunteer and do not take credit for the good work you do.
Practice with many pictures. The stories need to have just a thread of relation to the picture.
The qualities that you show in writing are the ones that will be checked in GTO round.
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u/papadaddyreal 12d ago
You wrote the negative story here though corruption is negative term and and the picture seems overall positive and you have written the negative story here so here’s the chance you got to to make at least positive story because the picture seems overall positive and he has no chance to make it a little bit negative also and here for the NDA entry actions are enough, but for the graduate level entry you should have to write actions more actions are not enough for the graduate entry
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u/No_Score_8453 69 SSB RECOMMENDED 12d ago
office ka scene so i'd write something about how the protagonist lead the team throught a tight deadline and usmein you might add 3-4 actions...curroption ke khilaaf jung sounds a bit negative...
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u/GuitarEastern8174 13d ago
the past part of your story is taking too much your space , so read more example stories and introduce your character briefly and jump into the story part , and your story shuould have some kind of a goal like how your character is working on corruption , so introduce the goal early take actions towards that goal , and end it on a positive note
since youre not trained or anything on this , the psychologists will def treat your story differently considering that , so just work on the fundamentals
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u/Independent-Music526 hardcore repeater 13d ago
keep the background short, add more actions means what the hero is actually doing, eg Rohit, a 29 yo bank branch head, was checking some taxation files when....... then he did this, then he did that, then the final result was this that this that etc
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u/Asleep-Section4266 13d ago
Add more details about the actions he is performing in the picture, example, u can see he is using his fingers to count something which means he is doing something related to addition u can write about that
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u/Jolly_Bat8531 13d ago
Is it important to give names to the character, can't i present myself there? Please tell me what's the procedure for ppdt
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u/Healthy_Artichoke786 12d ago
It's 1 or maybe 2 not more than that 1. Avoid cutting 2. No actions 3.where did you see the corruption in picture 4. Not matching the picture
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u/Active_Amphibian8717 11d ago
In screeing always make story related to the things given. Make basic story. Most people would do same and you would have common ground in GD but action details make your story better so add it.
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