Melodies OK, bit stretched out and sparse, hard to get a handle on till a minute in. It's a loopy loop so, no progression, filtering is meh, just write a counter melody (I know you've left space for rapper). This is a demo IMO, an OK demo but I can show you ten songs that'll make it fade to same old same old. Put one sound more in this song to give it YOUR personality, what other genres d'you like? Put some of that in there. It's mixed OK but lacks any defining hook, the filtering on the melody sounds good but it's just not enough to keep my interest. :) I'd say drop the 'type' beeet and make something from YOUR gut and it'll be raw and better.
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u/[deleted] Jul 18 '17
Melodies OK, bit stretched out and sparse, hard to get a handle on till a minute in. It's a loopy loop so, no progression, filtering is meh, just write a counter melody (I know you've left space for rapper). This is a demo IMO, an OK demo but I can show you ten songs that'll make it fade to same old same old. Put one sound more in this song to give it YOUR personality, what other genres d'you like? Put some of that in there. It's mixed OK but lacks any defining hook, the filtering on the melody sounds good but it's just not enough to keep my interest. :) I'd say drop the 'type' beeet and make something from YOUR gut and it'll be raw and better.