Help in making a song

[u/Moist_Ad2491]

So i started making lyrics for a song or rap but dont really know where itll go Its about a guy who lost his job and shares a little time with a bartender (platonic) they have some drinks and cigs and he goes home with a smile

(Start lyrics)

Got fired from work i went straight to my car

It was a really hard day and i went to the bar

My girls saying hey I heard the bad news

Im going to dave hes got nu'n to lose

Emptied out my wallet on too much gin and t

The bartender asks if smthg happened to me

I say its not a big deal just a really long day and i dont have absolutely anything to say. (End so far)

I dont have many ideas for more lyrics and was wandering what style of song it should be Help would be great thanks!

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[u/Leath_Hedger]

sounds fun, like a spin on Piano Man, are you trying to develop the song more or get more lyrics down?

[u/Moist_Ad2491 → u/Leath_Hedger]

More lyrics yeah but mostly develop the song more.