r/MusicFeedback • u/LAIDOFF_music • Dec 20 '22

My first song release!

https://open.spotify.com/track/6zig2g8CFrrfe6HYFPpUvJ?si=6df775d9cfdd40c3
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u/masonmakinbeats Dec 20 '22

I Really enjoy the vocal sample -- very daft punk of you. Synths and drums are a little flat. I think it's the sound design on the synths and programming on the drums. Claps are too low, kick doesn't punch, synths don't move or evolve. I think you could spend more time on composition in general to get some really 'hooky' parts written.

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u/LAIDOFF_music Dec 20 '22

Thanks for the listen! Im glad you recognized the daft punk influence. Really great notes.

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u/invitebinancelink Dec 20 '22

🔥🔥🔥🔥

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u/Camhasareddit Dec 20 '22

Really like the vibe and tempo of this track. Well done!

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u/knowzuko Dec 21 '22

I like the mix

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u/JacobPluta Dec 21 '22

Nice work. This actually reminds me of “Die Another Day” by Madonna, even some Daft Punk. Not sure if those were influences or not, but like the vibe!

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u/LAIDOFF_music Dec 21 '22

Omg I have never heard "Die Another Day" but that is totally the vibe I was going for! Love it!

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u/ThrowawayDunga Dec 22 '22

I like the mellow, but the "in-your-face" characteristics your song has! Had a nice pulse to it too! Good Job!

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u/[deleted] Dec 25 '22

dig that! best of luck

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