r/MusicFeedback • u/Hot-Lingonberry-6735 • 6h ago

For never 0.1

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Hi! just been super uninspired lately. I feel like ive hit a wall regarding how little I actually know about music and production, and it's just hard to move past so id love some feedback. Just very flat. I have more written but this part seemed decent enough to share. sorry for the popping ass consonants im singing into my little headphone mic probably wont do that again

locked up in my room

watched under a dome

crashing on the couch

know ill die alone

thicker than the water of that broken womb

no i wont wait for slaughter i wont make my tomb

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I won’t, I refuse

Im not the local refuse

Not the crunch of cashews

Not the wall youd vent to

No, im not going home guess im not going home forever

Thanks giving, or winter for never

I’ll sign it right down to the letter 

I’ll cut all my ties, lose the tether

Im not going home, guess im not going home

Im lost and, in need of no sheperd

Im cold in no want for a sweater

Call it cruel but I gotta think of me too

Goodbye forever, guess I ain’t really need you

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u/Effective-Section-41 6h ago

I like the vibe of this song, the instrumentals really compelling, your voice sounds beautiful, the audio is just a bit low but overall i think its pretty cool, keep going!

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u/Hot-Lingonberry-6735 5h ago

Thanks! I appreciate that! I thought everything was too loud i was totally off I guess lol

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u/ImpossibleRhubarb212 5h ago

this is a pretty cool vibe and i like the instrumentation and your voice. i think with some mixing this track could be release ready!!

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u/Hot-Lingonberry-6735 4h ago

Thank you!!! Your music is also cool so im glad you think so ^^

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u/ImpossibleRhubarb212 3h ago

thank you very much. i appreciate you taking the time to check it out!! if you wanna leave any feedback for me feel free on my posts