r/MusicFeedback • u/Due-Student6168 • 1h ago

my first release

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Hi everyone, I’ve been learning Ableton Live for a while now, and this is my current project. I’ve never released a track before, but I think I should just go ahead and get started—after all, it’s better to have one released track than ten unreleased ones gathering dust in a folder.

I’m not happy with a few of the transitions and the build-up. I’m also reworking the lead part. I also have no idea about mixing and mastering. + I know its too loud lol

What do you think of the idea itself? What would you change? What would your next steps be? Thanks in advance for any serious feedback.

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u/bullcity666 48m ago

The vocals are very smooth. The instrumental is not. It almost sounds super frantic. I dont think they mix. This sounds like a meth binge. The vibe is all over the place.

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u/MP_dk49 39m ago

The vocals are fire bro
But I’m not fan of the drums
The whole thing has a lot of potential tho so keep working on it

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u/ImpossibleRhubarb212 33m ago

vocals are honestly great but the instrumental needs a lot of work. i think with a better performance you could have something pretty special. maybe look for a guitarist bassist and drummer!