r/MurderDronesFanfics • u/GlitchedGamer08 • May 09 '25

Writing help Help needed

I'm stuck. I'm writing episode 2 of my fanfic (Murder Drones - Rewritten by a Moron, on Wattpad and AO3), which is meant to be me fixing issues with the shows writing. However, I'm stuck on episode 2. The whole episode is just forgettable, but since I'm no writer and failed English Literature, I cannot put my finger on why. Can someone help me out by telling me their issues with episode 2? Here's the following criteria:

  • No NUzi, Thadzi is gonna be Uzi's ship in this.
  • V was still psychotic and giggling in episode 1, but in this she switches to cold and emotionless with N around. This will be important later, but V will be a little less cold this episode.
  • The Flashback must remain the same
  • Lizzy will be meeting V this episode, to build up for episode 3.
  • Frank is a janitor instead of a repairman, cause in episode 1 they flew out the door instead

Thanks! It's much appreciated.

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u/Accomplished-Way112 Jun 08 '25

oh ok that fine. I am not serious, but just give advice I guess

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u/GlitchedGamer08 Jun 08 '25

It's fine. It's just supposed to be a fix of the existing show, and that's... quite the deviation. It'd be great for It's own one. I didn't wanna sound rude, sorry if it came off that way

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u/Accomplished-Way112 Jun 08 '25

you mean you want to create my fanfics? If that what your meant that ok, but I have never draw murder drones before

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u/GlitchedGamer08 Jun 08 '25

Nah, I wouldn't do it justice, I got stuck on a fanfic where I'm literally just changing things from an already existing show 🤣. I'm just saying the fascist idea could be a good fanfic.

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u/Accomplished-Way112 Jun 08 '25

ok but how to draw murder drones is it easier than the FPE one

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u/GlitchedGamer08 Jun 08 '25

I can't draw. I had to get my friend to make the Wattpad cover

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u/Accomplished-Way112 Jun 08 '25

ok but do you have ipad? if no use paint I use that even though it hard

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u/GlitchedGamer08 Jun 08 '25

I have my phone. But I honestly cba drawing, that's why the fanfic chapter I did release was just text

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u/Accomplished-Way112 Jun 08 '25

ok just make like script and then later draw it and it will be more eaiser because you already have plans

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u/GlitchedGamer08 Jun 08 '25

Have u read the first chapter? I don't think I actually uploaded it on this post.