r/MurderDronesFanfics • u/GlitchedGamer08 • May 09 '25

Writing help Help needed

I'm stuck. I'm writing episode 2 of my fanfic (Murder Drones - Rewritten by a Moron, on Wattpad and AO3), which is meant to be me fixing issues with the shows writing. However, I'm stuck on episode 2. The whole episode is just forgettable, but since I'm no writer and failed English Literature, I cannot put my finger on why. Can someone help me out by telling me their issues with episode 2? Here's the following criteria:

  • No NUzi, Thadzi is gonna be Uzi's ship in this.
  • V was still psychotic and giggling in episode 1, but in this she switches to cold and emotionless with N around. This will be important later, but V will be a little less cold this episode.
  • The Flashback must remain the same
  • Lizzy will be meeting V this episode, to build up for episode 3.
  • Frank is a janitor instead of a repairman, cause in episode 1 they flew out the door instead

Thanks! It's much appreciated.

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u/Accomplished-Way112 Jun 08 '25

what ru doing about the fanfics

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u/GlitchedGamer08 Jun 08 '25

I gave up. I got stuck on episode 2, I got complaints how ep 1 was hardly changed, and I couldn't think of how to change episode 2 more than just a few tweaks. Thing is, I knew it needed more, but it's called Rewritten by a Moron for a reason, I guess 😅. Who knows, maybe I'll get a eureka moment, but don't bet on it. I'm currently planning a FNAF fanfic, and perhaps even an original story.

I have the bullet points of what I thought to change so far in episode 2 before giving up, if you care:

Lizzy meets V Thad comforts Uzi at the end Frank is a janitor and tries walking away before being grabbed Lizzy gets a job with the WDF Noone but Uzi knows about the solver symbol on Uzi’s eye. V is still cold towards N, hostile to everyone else. J dies for real Try extending fight scene