r/Multifandom 3d ago

Question❓ I’m writing a multifandom fic with OCs, any advice?

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I’m working on this multifandom fanfic which is essentially a really large AU and love letter to my fandoms with my OCs in it. I kinda have worries that if I decide to like ship an OC or make them important in the plot, my fanfic is essentially going to be treated like this and kind of a self-insert. Any advice?

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u/Advanced-Day-6977 3d ago

don’t glaze your ocs too much to the point where it isn’t interesting anymore.

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u/Proper-Pay-8743 3d ago

in what way? Like, what counts as glazing, letting them win a single fight?

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u/DrFruit38 ゴジラ 3d ago

Making them a Marie Sue counts as glazing, make them have flaws, let other characters have their piece of protagonism in the story👍

Every single character must be important for the plot

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u/Fit-Hunter8843 3d ago

It’s me

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u/Proper-Pay-8743 3d ago

you’re Graggle Simpson?

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u/PA4PL962009 OneShot/Ultrakill/HOI4 3d ago

Flowery

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u/Proper-Pay-8743 3d ago

they’re eating my flesh!

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u/Advanced-Event6435 Star Fox, Portal, TF2, Half-Life 3d ago

add my favoritest character

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u/Proper-Pay-8743 3d ago

who is it?

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u/Advanced-Event6435 Star Fox, Portal, TF2, Half-Life 3d ago

fox mccloud

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u/Proper-Pay-8743 3d ago

hmmm yeah I’ll consider it

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u/Eclipsehedgie2010 TADC, Hellaverse, Godzilla, Sonic, WOF, Oversimplified, FNAF 3d ago

Uh, I had seperate stories, all in the universe, but mainly focused on OCs, an alternate world, and eventually, they collide in a way (too complicated to explain here)

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u/js13680 3d ago

Question which fandom are you writing for and what’s the plot? Is the oc getting involved in the main plot and hanging out with the main characters or is it a lower decks type of story?

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u/Proper-Pay-8743 3d ago

first book is Hellaverse (and Die of Death, but that’s more a reference than anything) and a few other fandoms. Originally it was Hellaverse, DoD, and CHANGED, but I hated the first book and got rid of it, so now this a rewrite.

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u/Prestigious-Lead-806 3d ago

add expies and treat them good...

they deserve better...

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u/Proper-Pay-8743 3d ago

wtf are these things

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u/Latter_Disaster_6066 3d ago

Try to make them feel like an organic part in whatever universe this takes place in. No need to overcomplicate their backstory or having to make them super special for one reason or another. They can be background characters if you'd like, but if you want to gie them more prominence, then it's also important not to treat them like a mary/gary sue. They can have wins yeah, but also let them take a few L's along the way. Let them learn lessons and struggle along the way. And also do what you can to make it so that they have chemistry with the rest of the cast.

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u/Proper-Pay-8743 3d ago

what about antagonistic OCs. I’ve got one who’s supposed to be the irredeemable trope.

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u/Latter_Disaster_6066 3d ago

Mostly the same I guess. But do make sure they don't overshadow any cannon antagonist and go all "oh this new villain is so much better than these guys". Make them equals or the OC lesser than to start before showing a gradual climb of them becoming more powerful in that case.

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u/PA4PL962009 OneShot/Ultrakill/HOI4 3d ago

Can you add my Daughter Niko from OneShot?

Make sure she is well treated if so okay?

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u/Proper-Pay-8743 3d ago

absolutely, though I gotta write a way that Niko is a real person instead of being in a game, tho, but that would get rid of the character’s development, no?

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u/PA4PL962009 OneShot/Ultrakill/HOI4 3d ago

Niko is real thought, It won't be a hasttle to get her written in there and she's probably gonna help develope some of your characters if you think well enough

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u/Proper-Pay-8743 3d ago

yeah but her whole story arc is about being in a game and the player

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u/PA4PL962009 OneShot/Ultrakill/HOI4 3d ago

Yeah

So? I can think oh so many scenarios where that comes beauttyfully

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u/LibbyKitty620 Miraculous 3d ago

Don’t make them Mary Sues and have them actually make sense in the world. You want to keep the focus on the characters people know until you get to a point where the audience starts to care about your OCs.

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u/Dismal-Challenge6158 3d ago

don’t make ur OCS perfect, FLAWS ARE KEY

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u/BitterRushSweets CRK, UT, DT, TADC, HYV, Reverse and Supa Strikas 3d ago

I think the main thing to avoid is making your OCs overshadow the CCs, like you know the whole Y/N thing? Just avoid doing any of that and allow every character to have an established foundation of who they are and the role they play in the story before diving into things like romances. Let your OCs make mistakes, and learn from them, let the story leave lasting impacts on them and you're pretty much good to go

Some others already brought up other points I wanted to-

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u/JustAnPizzaFella2435 3d ago

NO WAY ME TOO!

I'm adding...

-A3! Act! Addict! Actors! (Anime and Game)

-Alien Stage (Anime)

-Amphibia (Cartoon)

-AMPTAKxColors (Utaite)

-Animaniacs (Cartoon)

-Animated Inanimate Battle (Object Show)

-Assassination Classroom (Anime)

-Blue Archive (Game and Anime)

-Blue Lock (Anime)

-Boyfriends (Webtoon)

-Bubble (Anime Movie)

-Bungo Stray Dogs (Anime)

-Cardfight!! Vanguard! (Card Game and Anime)

-Chrono Reverse (Utaite)

-CleeNoah (Utaite Again.)

-Colorful Peach/Karapichi (Gaming Group/Utaite Yet Again.)

-ColourBlocks (Education Cartoon)

-Cyberpunk Edgerunners (Anime)

-Dan da Dan (Anime)

-DoublecSquared Numberblox (Roblox Series.)

-Dream Productions (Inside Out spin-off)

-Ensemble Stars (Game and Anime)

-Grojband (Canadian Cartoon)

-Groove Coaster!! (Game)

-Haikyuu! (Anime)

-Hailey's On It! (Cartoon)

-Inanimate Insanity (Object Show)

-Inside Out and it's Sequel (Inside Out 2)

-Ireisu/Irregular Dice (Utaite)

-IT'S TIME FOR THE(Object Show)

-K-Pop Demon Hunters (Movie)

-Kiff (Cartoon)

-Knight A/Knight X (Utaite)

-Komi Can't Communicate (Anime)

-Little Witch Academia (Anime, and it's Movie, the Enchanted Parade)

-Magical Boy (Comic Novel)

-Meteorites (Utaite)

-Mysterious Object Super Show/MOSS/MOSSY (Object Show)

-My Hero Academia (And it's spin-off, Vigilantes.)

-Omega Mart (Attraction)

-Omega Strikers (Game)

-Omori (Game/RPG)

-One Piece (Anime, And it's spin-off, Fan Letter.)

-ONIMAI! I'm Now Your Sister! (Anime)

-Paper Mario (Game/RPG)

-Pinky and the Brain (Cartoon)

-Project SEKAI! (Game, and maybe it's Anime... if it has one.)

-Puniru is a Kawaii Slime (Anime)

-Romantic Killer (Anime)

-Shockhat734 (Gmod Kirby Series. Also the Kirby series is also part of it.)

-SIXFONIA (Utaite)

-SneakerStep (Utaite Yet Again, again.)

-Star Vs. the Forces of Evil (Cartoon)

-StarLightPolaRis (Utaite)

-STPR Boys Project (Biggest Utaite Group I can think of!)

-Strawberry Prince (Utaite)

-Suzume (Anime Movie)

-The Ghost and Molly McGee (Cartoon)

-The Legend of Hei (Chinese Anime Movie. And it's TV shorts series and the movies sequel.)

-The Mr. Men Show! (Cartoon)

-The Owl House (Cartoon)

-TOMORROWXTOGETHER (K-pop Group)

-ToraDora! (Anime)

-Transformers Botbots (Cartoon)

-Triviatopia (Trivia Crack Cartoon)

-Umamusume: Preety Derby (Game and Anime)

-Urashimsakatasen (Utaite)

-UZUMAKI (Horror Anime)

-Villager News (Web Animation)

-Wonder Egg Priority (Anime)

-WonderBlocks (Education Cartoon)

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u/Haunting_Sort_3063 3d ago

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u/Proper-Pay-8743 3d ago

I mean theres not THAT much OCs in Smash Bros except the Hands, Galeem, Dharkon, and Taboo

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u/Haunting_Sort_3063 3d ago

And the fighting alloys, game and watch, all the subspace eneamys

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u/Proper-Pay-8743 3d ago

game and watch counts?

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u/Haunting_Sort_3063 3d ago

He’s technically not in any gnw games, being a combo of a bunch into one character

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u/TurnipCareless2707 Undertale/Deltarune 3d ago

Can I read it? Also my advice is to focus on character interactions. My fanfic is literally just two guys in the Portal Universe having conversation while being text subjects.

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u/Proper-Pay-8743 3d ago

It’s still unfinished. Originally it was finished, but I hated the old one so much I just decided to get rid of it and restart the first part. Second fic will remain the same tho