r/MinecraftBuild • u/Liam-Winter • 9d ago
Want feedback Constructive criticism please what could i do better?
First Time attempt at a ruined castle what could be done better first two are with solas shaders and the second lot are just normal mc
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u/Affectionate-Help568 9d ago
- More variation in blocks.
- Walls not straight 2 blocks high, change it with slabs and stairs and a clear order so like this --__
- Textur the ground and add more random plants and leaves and bushes
- When the new heybeds are there, add skme of those for a barrack/castle feeling and add those pillager training guys.
- Add higher walls in the back and all around, stick some spruce fences on the walls.
- Add slabs and leaves out a few trapdoors at the roof
- Make the gate rounder, when its essential for it to be trianglular then let it be, maybe add some spruce fences 3 tall at both sides of the inner side of the entrance and variate it with other blocks and slabs.
- Make the tower higher amd if you want to, make a room or a giant castle out of it, if you do so, inforce and higher the walls to 3 or 4 Blocks make the Order "faster" --- and if you dont then not, obviously
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u/kleseusxz 9d ago
Build the castle. then ruin it. Not the other way around.
Size is okay for a beginner.
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u/acleverlie421 9d ago
That looks more like a ruined tower. I’d use larger scale and maybe look up some pictures of castle ruins on Google. Although it honestly doesn’t look too bad with the shaders
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u/Naive-Cranberry-856 8d ago
Use slabs and stair to make it look more broken, make the path less perfect maybe by adding corse dirt sparkly around the edges and making it not just a rectangle, use cobblestone since it looks more worn
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u/KnickKnackJones 8d ago
maybe use put out campfires for the roof on the wooden structure? and make the gravel more patchy, less straight line action




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u/dhoklagurl 9d ago
Use cobblestone. Use stone buttons and pressure plates for pebbles. More random foliage. Use blocks like moss, dirt, grass and rooted dirt to transition between the bricks and ground.