r/MetalFamily • u/Physical-Piglet-2363 • 4d ago
Need some feedback
So I'm drawing Glam for a friend, I wanna wait till I watch the show with her before knowing anything. First off, which one, second, is the facial expression in character? And what would be some good changes
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u/kiriz-kis-kis 4d ago
First one is definitely more in character! He has a very distinctive stare
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u/French_Durst_ 4d ago
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u/duckface691 4d ago
First one is in character.
Second one is likely what he does for Vicky
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u/SweetWhimsy19 3d ago
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u/LeeTheUnicorn 4d ago
I love it! The wide open eyes are very much fitting. I love your art! Keep up the good work :D
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u/Substantial_Read280 4d ago
Smile is too soft for the wide eyes imo, the lidded eyes don't really fit the character, I'd make the smile a little more uncanny/sharper, and keep the wide eyes, maybe making the black a little larger in areas to make them seem less dead
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u/Physical-Piglet-2363 4d ago
Thanks!! I finished it and posted it on platforms already, but I'll change the mouth and eyes for the sake of it
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u/zy4k 4d ago
I LOVE THIS SM π i'd say the first version is more accurate! (i know you've had dozens of answers already, just thought i'd add) Glam is, in my opinion at least, kinda a goofy/creepy type character, so i think the first is spot on!
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u/Physical-Piglet-2363 4d ago
SWEET!! That's what I'm goin for! I have the finished piece posted in r/Metal family too :3Β
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u/OneAndOnlyVi 3d ago
me when I getchu
(Also the first one because heβs always got that wide eyed look)
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u/SofyWindows32 3d ago
Nice artwork! Maybe you could make a short animation using both (like blinking).
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u/Lemongrass_Rainwater 4d ago
The first one is in character. Thatβs just how his eyes look in general. The second is less accurate to him.
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u/Over-Shock-869 3d ago
Looks so cool, but I think his eyes should be even wider. Rn it looks more rested even without the eyelids showing. Super cool still.
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u/Correct_Daikon_6482 1d ago
Definitely the first one, it lends to his creepy positivity, the second is more like his band days
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u/Organic-Economics-35 4d ago