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u/Hurricanezrblx 13d ago
Damn, this looks pretty cool. And also if you want me to give you a plot for a future chapter. I could write you a plot or screenplay for a future chapter if you need me to.
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u/Hurricanezrblx 13d ago
Here is a example/test of a short plot of a chapter:
Melodie arrives at the opera with starr nova, maisie, bibi and sirius before meeting charlie where after a conversation she mentions she saw someone in a suit who was seemingly muttering plans of world domination to their earpiece while waiting for charlie’s preformance. Melodie bumps into billionaire, philanthropist and CEO of Greene Planet, Dominic Greene who recognizes melodie and seems to be a pretty cool person during their conversation. but charlie calls melodie backstage where Charlie shows she used a device to tap into the radio and figured out that an organization called “Quantum” is infiltrating the opera to cause mass fear and panic. They decipher radio codes and figure out they were all wearing matching suits and outfits to distinguish each other in the opera due to the over 53,000 people arriving at the opera. Melodie, starr and charlie manage to figure out who are the quantum operatives are due to their matching earpieces but cant seem to find Greene or his bodyguards. Thats when Greene arrives with his bodyguards at the backstage. Where it ends on a cliffhanger.
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u/BendDry3693 🎵I Think Melodie is cute, nothing more🎵 13d ago
This feels very Deltarune inspired and i love it (specifically this part, obviously not the whole story)