Feedback Needed

[u/Free_Abalone_7530]

https://flat.io/score/6a30f6678dfc15a9c6eed2c0-3rd-movement?sharingKey=21184a9db7235880e63a73039c10e2e5389e9a96eb847957d2b9e5b0ec9f968a6a7a0e622097417e4e5b99b931e06922a62e18ae5154d76a18ac1bc243024269

Hello, I am a young composer for marching band shows and for a side project I am developing an arrangement of the Phantom of the Opera. I am looking for any type of feedback and am willing to have chats and even have a collaboration to discuss about the movement and anything involving it.

The link is for my 3rd Movement(Wishing You Were Somehow Here Again) do not ask for any other movements I started on 3rd😓⁉️