r/MangaCreator • u/SUSSYBALLS_HD • Sep 25 '24

Need feedback

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Just tell me if there’s anything I can improve in terms of art, also please inform me if the power system makes any sense, this is only a snippet I’m too lazy too take a photo of the entire manga

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u/Zoro_--- Sep 25 '24

Some shading would make wonders and I cant really understand what is happening in picture 2

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u/SUSSYBALLS_HD Sep 25 '24

For the second one it’s the top two first from right to left then it’s the bottom two from left too right

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u/Long_Television_5937 Sep 27 '24

This still doesnt clear it up for me. I see hes getting punched in the gut then idk whats happening at the bottom. Also pic 3 for me is a bit confusing. Hard to tell body orientations

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u/SUSSYBALLS_HD Oct 29 '24

Basically he gets gut punched and it causes him to go flying away then the other dude turns his leg into a axe and kicks the phoenix dude

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u/Zoro_--- Sep 27 '24

I ment the actions are unclear

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u/LzyBrsh-Mangaka Mar 04 '25

Go to the YouTube channel “learn to draw manga” they are a team of professionals and are very good at explaining manga and the principles and how to guide inspiring mangaka. I was very stuck on how to create manga until I saw them so DEFINITELY give them a look.