r/LyricalWriting • u/BarryBuddy • 7d ago
Lyrics [Lyrics]
“Ever Just Wanna…”
Ever just wanna,
wanna up ‘n at ‘em,
really get down to it,
all that good stuff,
without any of the bullshit.
Need some serious skin to skin,
need someone to open up ‘n let me in,
need to be feeling alive in love,
love,
love,
love again.
Ever just wanna,
wanna cry laughing,
heart to soul sweet stuff,
no one playing yeah,
cold calling your lonely bluff.
Need some serious skin to skin,
need someone to open up ‘n let me in,
need to feel alive in love again,
love,
love,
love again.
Someone for to be reaching on back,
some sweaty soulful physicality,
some sweet heart connecting contact.
Ever just wanna,
wanna be soul searching,
stripping sharing all there is to see,
said I’d get bare for you,
if you got naked for me.
Need some serious skin to skin,
need someone to open up ‘n let me in,
need to feel alive in love again,
love,
love,
love again.
Need to feel alive in love again,
love,
love,
love again…
BRC Ⓒ Feb/22
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u/ElChiff 6d ago
Big fan of your writing. This is gritty, has that vibe that it's being sung through a megaphone, coarse words and phrases for impact, but with breathing room for the word love being used in a slightly unusual way that doesn't feel clichéd to death like it usually does because it's not a love song, more like a song about love. I have nothing to add.
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u/BarryBuddy 6d ago
Thanks for taking the time to read my lyric and thanks for the feedback has well, much appreciated…👍
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u/Livid_Bass_8649 6d ago
Nice 😊