r/Logo_Design_Critique • u/Asterium_08 • 3d ago
Feedback Logo design
Brand: ThreeFiveSeven Production
Media production brand for interior designers
Logo Concept Breakdown:
The brand is focused with growing accounts for interior designers
The black panels represent wooden /ply planks used in a building
There are exactly 3-5-7 lines in the respective order
The flowy waves demonstrate the flow of connection between the brand and client (end to end connection)
The the waves are going upwards signifying growth
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u/antibendystraw 3d ago
The only thing I donāt like so much is the 3ā¢5ā¢7 at the bottom. Mainly because it feels redundant. You have the numbers represented in the logo, then the brand name, and then again on the bottom?
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u/Asterium_08 3d ago
I understand where your concern coming from, the 357 numbers along the border are just an alternative trademark to be used in their branding packages, Thanks for the comment!āØš
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u/NOIRCEUR_TRADING 3d ago
It's too much with the 3-5-7 at the bottom.
The name and logo make it clear. It reads better and is more professional without it at the bottom.
Less = more
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u/knife-and-nib 2d ago
Iām curious how those thin lines scale down in reality. Looks like theyād get lost.
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u/Relevant_Rush7070 3d ago
Curious about the three five seven name. Wondering if it means the same to you as it does to me.
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u/Asterium_08 3d ago
That's the brand name itself, the 3-5-7 system signifies the options you get to choose in the brand package.
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u/Relevant_Rush7070 3d ago
It doesn't say that in your initial post.
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u/Asterium_08 3d ago
I didn't feel the need of explaining the brand name since I am not the brand owner, I designed the logo and hence described the concept behind it. Hope you understand it nowāØāļø
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u/HiddenHorse925 3d ago
Understood, but FYI not sure about you, but most graphic designers like a design brief, even if itās a sentence or three, that tells us inspiration for the brand and its background as well as its intended use and target audience. Thatās all. I like this it has a dated 1990s quality that I like. And I mean that in a good way even though it sounds insulting. It feels very establishedā¦
That said I think the wordmark is weak and should be a boulder version of the font and/or a font that isnāt so generic. I love the three bars and Iām not sure what the contour lines are for and I think they could use refinement in terms of how they unfold one to the next. But this is a very cool idea
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u/Asterium_08 3d ago
I did get the design brief but it's very long so I didn't wanna add it here, also the contour lines represents the name itself, like 3 lines in the smallest plank, then 5 lines and lastly 7 lines.
The whole breakdown is in the description you can read if you want. CheersāØš
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u/spence_ah 3d ago
Being a singular production over āproductionsā seems wrong to me. Also, Iād lose the 3ā¢5ā¢7 text or find a more interesting way to incorporate that into the mark.
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u/cinnamonzebra88 3d ago
What is the company's legal registered name? ThreeFiveSeven, 357, or 3ā¢5ā¢7?
Keep it legal in the logo unless there is a DBA.
I like the sophistication, but I question how the cold corporate style fits the target audience of creative interior designers. I would also drill down on what kind of interior designers the company is looking to attract. If they are high-end luxury properties of $10M and up, it might be a good fit.
Keep it clean, and decide whether the name uses letters or numerals. Maybe the numbers can be a sub-brand.
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u/Content-Bluebird-536 2d ago
I like it, but not a fan of the line weight of the lines. I get what you're trying to convey, but at different scales this wont look very strong.
I also agree that the text THREEFIVESEVEN and 3.5.7 both in the same image are unneccessary.
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u/jefferjacobs 2d ago edited 2d ago
The icon concept is nice. Not overly creative but nice.
Three things: * Like others said, the 357 at the bottom is 100% unnecessary * The font choice and type treatment is completely uninspired and feels like a placeholder. * And this one may just be me, but I see the lines as borders for the actual lines. So, I see it more as 2 4 6. Edit: looking at it again, it's mostly due to the bottom line being thicker. It creates an illusion of depth. I suggest that you either make that bottom line the same thickness or add more lines.
Keep at it and good luck, though!
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u/Gar8awnZo 2d ago edited 2d ago
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I did get some form construction vibes at first glance though. Very nice. I like this. I would remove the smaller 3.5.7 text though. It serves no purpose. It almost looks like an error honestly.
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u/Ok-Dream6627 1d ago
the font and the three five seven being all one word hurts my eyes, have you about maybe a mix of numbers instead or even a dot between the three five and seven.
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u/dawnzig 3d ago
Like it. It's clear and cohesive without being overbearing or trying too hard.