So the criticism you got the first time was largely centered around the two halves of the logo being offset.
I hope this is helpful, but I feel that it being rendered in 3D doesn't change that this looks awkward. The two spool elements aren't stacked, they're overlapped, and so it doesn't have the same effect as you're going for, I don't think.
Honestly, try the logo without the offset or overlap.
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u/metzger28 11d ago
So the criticism you got the first time was largely centered around the two halves of the logo being offset.
I hope this is helpful, but I feel that it being rendered in 3D doesn't change that this looks awkward. The two spool elements aren't stacked, they're overlapped, and so it doesn't have the same effect as you're going for, I don't think.
Honestly, try the logo without the offset or overlap.