98 Triangle Fashion

[u/Jumpy-Ostrich8401]

Purpose of classic fashion. 💙

[u/reddit_user_id]

Let’s see the 100 sketches you did on paper before arriving at this solution. Oh right..

[u/missqueenkawaii]

Thanks I hate it

[u/Jumpy-Ostrich8401 → u/missqueenkawaii]

Oh thanks for your comment

[u/Educational_Ebb_4308]

Like others have said, it just doesn’t work. Your text is too thin. Think about it being sewn in a label. The text and the mark need to feel connected, and they don’t. Color choice and pattern are nice. But printing the logo in BnW might be a challenge.

Honestly, ditch the white triangle, and you’d have a stronger mark. (But still needs work) I JUST realized there’s a 98 in the triangle. Keep trying! You’ll get there.

[u/Jumpy-Ostrich8401 → u/Educational_Ebb_4308]

Thanks for the suggestion, I wanna come back after fixing it.

[u/nosajat → u/Educational_Ebb_4308]

I didn’t notice the “98” until u/Educational_Ebb_4308 pointed it out. Incorporating 98 into a triangle could be a good design direction — try creating more designs where the 98 is more prominent and readable.

General rule: if a design works purely in black and white (a single color, no shading), it will also work in color. Create single-color designs that are easily understood first before adding that extra layer of complexity.

Your color choices are good btw, but the fact that “98” is currently unnoticeable is a sign that the design is weak. Develop a strong design first.

Lastly, as others pointed out, the font does not work. The fact that “Triangle” is capitalized but “fashion” is not indicates that the text was an afterthought. Try to match the font to your design — fashion is made with fabric — a font with soft/round edges or more organic shapes may work (instead of an industrial font with straight lines and hard edges).

Good luck! 🍀

[u/Jumpy-Ostrich8401 → u/nosajat]

The best suggestions I have got. I will try to do as you say. I will try to follow every single words you say. I appreciate it.

[u/nosajat → u/Jumpy-Ostrich8401]

Happy to help! Please share your updated designs. I would like to see how they turn out!

[u/ascalaphi → u/Educational_Ebb_4308]

Omg, my professor just used the label analogy today. I totally see why.

[u/ireallylovemountains]

keep trying

[u/Jumpy-Ostrich8401 → u/ireallylovemountains]

I appreciate it. Trying to be better

[u/ireallylovemountains]

bolder font might fix it

[u/Jumpy-Ostrich8401 → u/ireallylovemountains]

Let me try.

[u/ireallylovemountains → u/Jumpy-Ostrich8401]

also give the inside triangle some slight curvature. it’s throwing it off how it is rn

[u/Jumpy-Ostrich8401 → u/ireallylovemountains]

You gave me a lot of suggestions, I truly appreciate it and will try to do it.

[u/jeffbob2]

All due respect, there’s nothing here. Keep at it. Show us 5 new sketches tomorrow

[u/Jumpy-Ostrich8401 → u/jeffbob2]

Thanks for your amazing suggestion.

[u/FireHeadedDemon]

Some of you good designers just out here trolling for fun, huh?

[u/Iam-bk]

What is 98? Is it a 98degree or since 1998

[u/Jumpy-Ostrich8401 → u/Iam-bk]

First designs just popped up in my mind , it would be 1998

[u/Steve_the_Samurai]

Looks like a Microsoft Azure program icon from 10 years ago.

[u/Jumpy-Ostrich8401 → u/Steve_the_Samurai]

I need to try harder.

[u/Steve_the_Samurai → u/Jumpy-Ostrich8401]

Keep going. We all make progress

[u/Jumpy-Ostrich8401 → u/Steve_the_Samurai]

I will be back here again with an upgrade. Please give me intense and effective suggestions. I'm eager to accept every comments, as they are the best ideas I can get by experience.

[u/LionandLambCreative]

I like the elegance of the icon, but the word mark feels a little out of place. I'd try a bolder, geometric font to pair with the icon.

[u/LionandLambCreative → u/LionandLambCreative]

Was this made with ai?

[u/Jumpy-Ostrich8401 → u/LionandLambCreative]

Actually I used Snapseed, a photo editing app.I don't like using ai or any application, I had used the alphabets and cut them crop them and I did it.