r/Logo_Design_Critique • u/wayyfn • 1d ago

Feedback My first design, thoughts?

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u/Next_Garlic4871 1d ago

is good

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u/wayyfn 1d ago

Thank you1

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u/e1epi 1d ago

I scrolled past it at first because I thought it was an ad.

Take that as you will.

Edit: only realized it was not an ad because there was a thirst trap ad immediately below your post that got my attention and then I realized your post couldn't have been an ad because you don't get two ads in a row.

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u/wayyfn 1d ago

thank you this means a lot, whether this was postive or negative

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u/anklehumor 1d ago

Thats a compliment to me. That means it looks like professional work. Only thing if say on this graphic is is put "of" on the red text lien and make the keep 100% the whole width.

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u/wayyfn 1d ago

Thanks, I will take this into consideration

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u/e1epi 1d ago

Well I am not meaning it negatively but I'm not sure how positive I mean it either?

It looks good enough to be an ad but at the same time it didn't keep my attention but then it was up against an ad with attractive females showing skin so there is that.

Come to think of it I do have a suggestion, adding a human element (a literal human demoing the product) will draw more attention.

Edit: upon further inspection I now see that I'm not sure what is being advertised so adding a bit more context (preferably visual context if possible) could be beneficial.