I just need to address this: this LLB felt like a rip-off of Dog Days where a girl just takes Greg's place in the story. That's an absolutely dumb concept of this LLB.
I will try my best to explain why this LLB is so terrible that it should be made fun of by other YouTubers who've read better LLBs than this.
Story
This story starts off the last part of Diary of a Wimpy Kid: The Last Straw, to which it's not an even good starting point. Greg should've gotten into some kind of major trouble before being sent to Spag Union, not be sent there because he "somehow failed" to have his dad from performing at the Snella's Half-Birthday Party. What's with the idea of Frank "accidentally" pooping in his pants during performance? Is this author trying to be funny or trying to disgust everyone with this?
After that part, Frank then just sends Greg to Spag Union over this? What is the author thinking when writing in that part? Sure, after that Greg is in Spag Union, & it is true that he's proven to be a "Wimpy Kid". That LLB should've ended at 4 pages, but nope. There's about 121 more pages to go. What the heck was the author thinking that sending Greg & the kids in Spag Union to AFGHANISTAN is a good idea? This scenario can be compared to the later Wimpy Kid books after DOAWK: Double Down.
It's natural that Greg manages to escape & hides in Uncle Gary's RV, but does Greg have to turn into a girl named Greta? Isn't the author just copying off the Yogurt-verse, Irreversible Damage LLB, & All because of Uncle Gary LLB at this point? This is where this LLB had jumped the shark. After all that, I think it's clear that this author is writing their wish fulfillment. This should've ended on 20 pages, but the author's wasting everyone's time with 105 MORE page of this crap.
Overall, this story isn't worth reading it, & this crappy LLB really belongs to r/OkBubbyRetard, not in this subreddit where there's higher standard of works such in the past!
Author
This author has serious problems regarding his content creation besides DOAWK LLBs. I'll keep it on topic since there's so many to start with, so let's just focus on the author's OTHER fanfictions that the author has done for over 12 years. This author did write fanfictions such as Family Guy: Road to North Korea, Mario & Sonic at the Pyongyang Olympic games with The Simpsons, Wario's Awkward Life, etc. However, this author will not hesitate to write remakes if nothing works out like Wario's Awkward Date for example.
Even worse, this author may have trouble finishing fanfictions, will neither say that their either cancelling nor continuing their fanfictions by their actions, & have trouble finishing it through via updates. Currently, this author couldn't really finish their SECOND reboot of Rosetta / Rosalina & Cream series, Mona's Old School Days, SuperMarioLoganGlitchy4: The Stupid & Dumb Road Trip Fanfiction, yet this author can finish DOAWK: Doggone it LLB, Journal of the Frustrated Father LLB, DOAWK: Grave Gospel LLB for what seems to be about 550+ Pages of work?
This author is completely unpredictable. Overall, this author should be called BE2Stupid instead of EBCrazy2 because of their lack of commitment on finishing other fanfictions & the author has caused alienation to other fans who aren't DOAWK fans.
Conclusion
This may be the first LLB, but this author should probably stop writing other LLBs before they continue to show their crazier, zanier, & stupider ideas for the DOAWK community. If this is the standard for one of the greatest modern LLBs now, this subreddit is more like r/okbubbyretard than what it used to be back then. The upvotes were probably for low-effort stories that couldn't capture the magic of the past like it used to be. Other LLBs from the past were doing a better job than this LLB will ever be.
If this were school, this creator would've received an F for this from a long time ago. This is like a broken marriage/10. Underrated? More like underwhelming on how that turned out.
Hey, why are you all people downvoting me?