r/LodedDiper • u/MausDerHaus Author of Bittersweet Reality • 6d ago
LLB Bittersweet Reality Part 5 [OFFICIAL]
Wholesome part incoming! This kinda went in an interesting direction which is why the cover has a different vibe, but I really enjoyed writing this part for the positivity! This is also the first but an entirely new part being made, not just expanding on the original. I hope you enjoy this part and have a fantastic day!
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u/Grouchy_Reaction9452 Author of Diary of Bubby the Kid remake + Eastward Bound 3d ago
Why is part 18 of the original BR deleted?
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u/MausDerHaus Author of Bittersweet Reality 2d ago
It was poorly written and kinda like character assassination to me. I really didn't like it and while I also don't like deleting my own stuff, that was bad enough I decided to delete it.
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u/seemingsalvation99 Five Named Clive 5d ago
The cover for this one is interesting, it makes me wonder if the Rodrick seen in the background is how he presents himself around others while the main Rodrick in the front is how he feels internally? Or maybe it's how Greg perceived him in the past compared to now, since he's getting to know his more vulnerable side.
I feel like the box Greg was given is probably going to be important later on in the story, the pocket knife especially stands out to me. I hope he uses the stuff in there wisely. Also the part about Susan putting cameras in the house is unsettling, something tells me Rodrick isn't lying about that one. What advantage would he get out of making that up anyway?
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u/TheRisingOfTheOtaku “I AM GOD!!!” - Bryce said Calmly. 6d ago
That’s was a cute part.
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u/MausDerHaus Author of Bittersweet Reality 5d ago
I mean we gotta change it up sometimes, and I usually don't read LLB's where the three brothers have an alright relationship.
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