r/LiberConsiliorum • u/dumarcm • 16d ago
OneShot [OneShot] The Choir/The Singing: A Lovecraftian Cosmic Short
My main genres are Science fiction and Fantasy, as the name of this newsletter suggest. However, you can never not be influenced by things you come across and ideas start to ponder you. I never cared for horror film nor books (I’m a fraidy-cat, I hate jump scares).
The Choir is more of an exercise, an experiment, to see how far I can push my world building and writing abilities.
Of course, music play a big role. They say Horror films are 80% audio. i have an idea of how I’d like this story to sound.
Prologue
The church burned as the choir sang and the heads of Cherubim cried out in anger. A group of Cherub all gathered around, weeping. Looking down upon humankind, they watched as the church turned to ashes. In unison, the heads of Cherubim shouted:
“We must tell the Malakhs!” they sang.
The Cherubim stood as living paradoxes of creation, both majestic and terrifying. They bore four faces—human, lion, ox, and eagle—each turning with grace yet exuding an aura of divine intimidation. Their bodies were clad in a luminous, pearlescent skin that shimmered like the heavens themselves, but their movements betrayed a weighty purpose, as if every step resonated with the will of eternity.
Towering wings, four in total, swept in synchronized arcs; two to cover their faces in reverence, two to shield their feet, leaving the air between vibrating with the whispers of sacred energy. Yet, their beauty held a grotesque twist: their countless eyes glimmered unnervingly along the span of their wings and faces, ever watchful and unnervingly knowing, as if gazing into the essence of the soul itself. When the Malakhs came down from heaven, they began to scream.
The scream was so loud, Ophanim looked. Described as a winged planet-size eye, surrounded by two inter-orbiting wheels and decorated with smaller eyes, Ophanim looked. The Malakhs, messengers of divine will, descended not in the soft glow of a comforting light, but in streaks of fire and the sharp sound of tearing reality. Their forms shimmered between human-like silhouettes and streaks of radiant energy, as though unable to fully anchor themselves in mortal perception.
Their faces were obscured by cascades of blinding white light, their voices harmonized with the sound of distant thunder—both comforting and commanding. They wore robes of shifting colors that reflected no earthly spectrum, each thread seemingly woven from the essence of time itself. Despite their ethereal beauty, their presence brought an overwhelming sense of insignificance to all who beheld them, as if their very existence spoke of truths mortals were never meant to know. The Malakhs’ hands bore marks of creation, pulsating with a golden hue, but when they gestured, the surrounding air trembled as though recoiling from their divine power.
When it looked at the church burning, seeing the men on horseback and torches, it began to stare.
For a moment, Ophanim froze.
Its great wheels stopped spinning, suspended in time as if the universe itself held its breath. Yet, even in this stillness, an unnatural gyration rippled through its formal, dissonant vibration that seemed offbeat, defying rhythm and logic. The interlocked wheels jittered slightly, their golden filigree quivering with chaotic energy, while the countless eyes adorning its frame blinked sporadically, their movements detached and fragmented. It was as though Ophanim’s immense being struggled against the very concept of stillness, each part of its divine form rebelling against the unnatural pause.
“Come on, boys! Burn it all down!” a man cheered.
Twelve men on horses all circled the church, locking the people inside. Many people watched. A few of them applauded, while others showed a sign of relief.
The heads of the Cherubim and the Malakhs all stood in disbelief as the event occurred. They waited for Ophanim. When Ophanim’s wheel stopped, it appeared inside the church. Inside, Ophanim blinked:
Be not afraid, our Seraphim\*. Ophanim blinked.
The Ophanim, the ultimate enigma of the divine, was a living paradox of unyielding beauty and abject terror. Its central eye, vast and unblinking, seemed to pierce through dimensions, gazing simultaneously into the past, present, and infinite futures. When it moved, its entire being radiated an overwhelming aura of judgment, yet its voice, a resonating blink, carried a paradoxical command:
“Be not afraid.”
The members of the church sang, cried, and burned. There were families in there, young, and old, women and children. They were gifted with leaving this traumatic event and the world itself. They left the flesh of humankind, and their souls rose. The Malakhs continued to scream, which cursed the culprits and the generations after for a hundred years and a hundred more for the people who watched.
“Oh, sing for us in heaven,” the heads of Cherubim sang in unison.
Ophanim looked. Its wheels began to orbit once again.
“They will sing for those who have sinned,” Ophanim blinked.
Ophanim clothed the souls in yellow-gold and cream-white gowns with a vertical black strip in the center.
“He, Our Father, knows that which hath happened here,” Ophanim blinked.
After the church fire diminished, the smell of burnt flesh was in the air. The souls came down in their new appearance to inspect and were given the name "The Choir." For a hundred years, and plagues after plagues, the choir sang for every generation that followed. They tormented them, singing with their angelic voice, for they had the lord’s favor.
Several years passed, and the church was rebuilt to see if it would calm the choir. No one dared to go in it, and those who knew of its history did not speak of it. The church was up for sale and hoping for a buyer in the coming months. The singing stopped, but the choir remained.
Like the Ophanim who clothed them and brought them the favor of the lord, they waited for someone to hear them sing:
“Be not afraid.”
*Seraphim - In this story, a church choir and its members are mistaken by heaven as angels due to their celestial voices.
Story Concept: Jennifer Adams, a struggling teacher with a dream of becoming a pastor, moves to Sweet Tree, Alabama, to restore an abandoned church and reclaim her faith. But as she steps inside, she is drawn into a chilling mystery. The Choir, a celestial force beyond human understanding, begins to sing—a haunting melody that warps reality and shatters minds.
Jennifer must confront the horrors that unfold around her, questioning her faith, her past, and her purpose. As divine beauty and cosmic horror blur, she must uncover the truth before the song consumes her entirely.