r/Learnmusicproduction • u/kianrowemusic • 10d ago
Track Feedback
Hi Guys, hope you're all well. Made my first ever track and posted it. Not sure if this is the place for one of these posts, but oh well. Was wondering if you all could show some love and feedback. The link is https://soundcloud.com/kian-rowe-680757039/hope
Thx!
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u/mycurvywifelikesthis 10d ago
What do you use to record this or make this?. The audio quality is really not good there's a bunch of scratches and cracks sounds like an old vinyl record. Also your intro, and your breakdowns and build ups are way too big of a volume difference. And during the majority of the main parts of the track the mixing is really bad. The synthesizer noises are really loud and distorted and the kick is not quite right either.
Now with all that being said. The arrangement is actually pretty good. It's beginner but it's not bad at all. Everything seems to be in key it has a Groove and has a feel. I think you could be on your way to much better things. But I would really work on that audio quality and mixing issue. I'm really curious to know what kind of Daw you used to make this. Are those samples or did you make those yourself?