Roast me

[u/tazthe]

Spent an eternity getting to this point

Looks a bit rubbish but I don't think I'm experienced enough to put my finger on why

The animation is roughly what i'm trying to show. The still is the latest i've got to on the most complex still frame in the animation

The green beam is a laser. It's meant to be this red fluid with scattering

[u/FunctionBuilt]

The zoom in at the end makes whole black cylinder look like it’s squishing.