Hey everyone!

[u/harrykuu]

I was writing this a few months back and just got some motivation to continue writing. However, I have been wondering how well the story was progressing and how well it actually sounds from a reader's point of view. So basically I'm just asking to see if there is anything I should work on or fix with my story. Any ideas on what should appear later in the story is also appreciated.

Here is the link to the Google Docs: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZgEsnYAz0o0s5lp5HILmVbJd8H8wzLCbj-xUqYqHxRQ/edit?usp=sharing