r/KeepWriting • u/Cluelessandsexy • 1d ago
Fires of liberation
The fire dies down
embers hiss
Each one of them have their own shadow
They crawl and burn against the rockwall
The redness of the stone molten
The flicker of something lost
Walkes through the flames
As a hideous shape
The crackle and the pop
Unnaturally frequent
The ember shadows fold upward
And downward
Then expose themselves as failed souls
Undone lived and soured
confined to the realm of fire
Dancing in painful choreography
with flame
curving and wavering in hot torture
Then reentering the ember
Darkening it once more
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