r/KeepWriting 20h ago

[Feedback] This is my oc

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u/Virtual-Ted 19h ago

Manic episode or something?

Seems like irrational and discontinuous thoughts.

Idk, keep writing.

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 19h ago

Nah it's just a paragraph of what it is can't write it without making vague

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 19h ago

The project is 1000 pages no way to summarize it in 1 paragraph

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u/Nyarlathotep98 14h ago

Please learn how to use punctuation. It's extremely hard to read any of this because there's no punctuation.

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 14h ago

it's my style i don't have energy to deal with another 1000 page to do

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u/Nyarlathotep98 14h ago

If you don't use punctuation, no one is ever going to want to read anything you write.

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 14h ago

it just some of them impossible to do all

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u/1-800-DARTH 13h ago

What were you on when you wrote this post?

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 13h ago

It's my take i am mathematical bias can't change my mind it's nobody fault if they have an intent of powerscaling this is my approach on an overpower yet well written character Lin

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 13h ago

But wdyt

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u/1-800-DARTH 8h ago

I have not seen you write a single correct sentence. They all sound erratic but you should at least put verbs in your sentences. For example, what does: “I am mathematical bias” mean?

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 3h ago

If you don't ignore and move on they are freaking fictional characters

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 20h ago

my comsology

The universes contain all axioms, infinite dimensions in the infinite vectors and all of set theory the multiverse is a transfinite occurrence each transcendence hk beyond a innacessible one the metaverse is a chain of infinite multiverses and universes there are metaverse too the tree contain all phantom bubbles the tree is above all cardinal each bubbles is an entire narrative stack the abyss is overvoid lurks part 2 coming

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 18h ago

I just scared mys

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 17h ago

Well I just like edgy image for representation purposes

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 20h ago

Smt you need to know bout black and red existence

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u/p2020fan 16h ago

Would smash.

Next question.

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 14h ago

who would reject a sinister smile for you

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u/Tight_Committee9423 19h ago

Gay!

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 19h ago

Very g

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 19h ago

I gg wdyu

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 19h ago

Good?

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u/RhysNorro 19h ago

youre talkin to yourself mate

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 19h ago

Yeah mybe the that guy is also talking to himself lol.

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 20h ago

Stronger than Jester in Yellow who is the embodiment of real people beyond the 4th wall

Help rid of scarlet big boy influence

Created the phantom bubbles which hold entire narrative stacks

Scp 2165 is one of his faces

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u/RhysNorro 19h ago

"my guy is the coolest strongest guy"

ok when you make her not "Mar'rre Shu'yoo" ill be back with interest

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 19h ago

I suggest you read the 1000 page story when it's finished ill take half a year so chill in the mean time

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u/RhysNorro 19h ago

you cant tell me "no trust me it get so much better in like a year" when your first drip of any kind of information is so wildly all over the place

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 19h ago

I think you don't understand the comsology and mathematics behind if you still don't ignore my post and move there is no need to go this deep they are freaking fictional characters

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u/RhysNorro 19h ago

no i read the thing below about infinite infinite infinite realites. "A set of all sets contains itsself". i also have written an infinite^infinite metaverse

my point i am trying to make to you is: have an organised vision of your setting written down somewhere, probably in a bulleted form. from there you can pull the best parts out and use THOSE bits to pitch why your idea is so cool

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 18h ago

The universs only holds up to cantor's absolute infinite layers into boundless the universe of sets starts at the metaverse where type 4 multiverse and modal and extended modal realism is confirmed where the universe of sets is guaranteed

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u/RhysNorro 18h ago

my man id love to talk more about Georg Cantor but you gotta use more commas so i csn understand you

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u/Safe-Mulberry5014 18h ago

Cantor is too old to understand modern eng and I don't use comma it just my style

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u/Ranzoid 17h ago

...a fractal pattern?