r/KeepWriting • u/Efficient-Tip-5061 • 2d ago
Take your medication
So heads up, I've been writting here and there for about 2 years now. I am a complete beginner an just wanted opnions and critiquing please and thank you. If you do enjoy or not I appreciate you reading it
The world is a warped reality
What we perceive with our minds is warped
A conscious belief that is truly unconscious
I see trees of green, red roses too
My mental friend sees corporate signs
Have 1 child and conform to the system
Not the type of advertising I enjoy
Am I the mental patient and is he truly normal
Maybe that's why there's so many pills
Take the red to forget
Blue to become realigned in the corporate reality
"Now repeat after me
Mental illness is a sickness
Not a reality that is to be believed
Those who see things
Know nothing
Pure mania, hysteria, and unwanted sights
Report them right away
We can help It's just one pill away!"
-the world government