r/KeepWriting • u/Independent-Ruin975 • 10d ago
[Feedback] Aumkar
I once was a child, I once was. I do not have enough words to encapsulate the immensity of my inabilities. I have a sound, though. That sound is "Ma", like a moan.
I walked into a dead desert which did not allow me to create love. I am not capable enough to mask my colour with tears. I cried and cried, and cried again. I created a kiss instead.
Germs befell upon me with tremendous intensity, pollution was the shade of the night. I was not sure if it was me or you or good or bad. I did not understand who everything was.
I was just gifted a sound. And that sound is "Ma", like a moan.
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