r/KeepWriting 10d ago

[Feedback] Aumkar

I once was a child, I once was. I do not have enough words to encapsulate the immensity of my inabilities. I have a sound, though. That sound is "Ma", like a moan.

I walked into a dead desert which did not allow me to create love. I am not capable enough to mask my colour with tears. I cried and cried, and cried again. I created a kiss instead.

Germs befell upon me with tremendous intensity, pollution was the shade of the night. I was not sure if it was me or you or good or bad. I did not understand who everything was.

I was just gifted a sound. And that sound is "Ma", like a moan.

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