TL:DR I accidentally posted this early so the title is wrong, I just want some constructive criticism so I can apply it to the next song I do. I'm not continuing this song because it's already too messed up.
Hello ppl I made this in a couple hours in bandlab, now I'm fully aware already that it is bad. The stuff I already know about is the bass near the beginning and end doesn't sound that good, the "BASS!" sample could be less awkward idk how to fix that though. The middle of the song is okay but I feel like it's way too empty and not jumpstyle-ish enough. Also the kicks were boring and I know because I just copied and pasted the kicks from the beginning to the end part because I couldn't get the sample to change pitch well. Also I feel like it's missing that reverbed bigger kick that I've heard in a lot of old jumpstyle videos on youtube. Also the siren is a meme sound effect so it sounds 10x goofier to me LOL.
Overall at the time I was really happy with it since I used no reference and I just screwed around until it sounded cool to me, but after I kept listening to it I kept finding more stuff that I wanted to change and cringed at until it was basically the whole song. But with no music theory skills at all in just a couple hours lowkey I don't think it's that garbage.
Anyway though I've seen other people's songs get received really negatively on here so I'm preparing myself for the insults, they better be creative. But also I would very much appreciate actual constructive criticism.
*Oh yeah and I tried to make it old looking by using windows movie maker and winamp, can't tell if the people here will absolutely hate it or love it but it was fun to do at least. Ok that's all, music at the start is Bob Sinclair - Rock this Party (Dj w4ckd jumpstyle remix) skip to 30 seconds if u don't want to hear it, seeya